Beta Request for Star Wars: The Clone Wars

[mossy_bench]

Hello! I made a Barriss Offee/Ahsoka Tano vid, from Star Wars: The Clone Wars, and I would love a second pair of eyes.

I have a couple specific things I'd appreciate feedback on (pacing/flow, coloring, effects) but I'd be grateful for any constructive criticism, honestly--regardless of whether you're familiar with the canon. This is my first full-length vid.

Some further information:

• Length is 3:52
• It was edited using Premiere
• Content-wise, this is an F/F shipping video with some cartoon violence and flashing.

If you're willing to beta, please feel free to leave a comment below or message me. Thank you! <3

Comments

[lizardjay]

If you don't have someone already I'd be happy to beta! I didn't get far into TCW but I know who Ahsoka and Barriss are at least.

[mossy_bench]

Hi! Thank you, that is so kind. <3 I am happy to provide a bit of context should it be helpful.

What's your preferred way of communicating going forward? (Dreamwidth PM, email, Tumblr, Discord, are all fine with me)

[lizardjay]

Those are also fine with me, but I'll vote for Discord. I'll PM you!