Request for a beta: Pacific Rim

[phenylalanine]

Hello, lovely vidders!

Would anyone out there like to take a quick look at a Pacific Rim vid? I am a relative newbie (this is only my third vid, and my first vid made with decent software), so although I'm proud of this one, I'm also constantly looking for improvement. :) Anything you can comment on, from the overall narrative to individual cuts or clip choices that do/don't work for you would be incredibly helpful. I've been staring at this thing for so long that I could really use a second pair of eyes to see the problems that I am missing.

This vid ended up being a love letter to everything I fell for in Pacific Rim... so, mostly Mako. :D Plus Mako & Raleigh, and Mako & Stacker, and JAEGERS. It's just under 4 minutes, set to a Vienna Teng song, and made in Sony Vegas.

Thank you!

Comments

[colls]

Hi!
I'm happy to offer feedback. I'm familiar with the movie and have re-watched it recently focusing on scenes for a vidbunny of my own, so I think I'm pretty comfortable with scene picking.
Feel free to PM me a link or whatever.

[phenylalanine]

You are so wonderful!! I will do that. :D

[seekingferret]

You can PM me as well- I've done one Pacific Rim vid, and have all the Jaeger feelings, and want there to be more Pacific Rim vids.

[phenylalanine]

Thank you so much! I'll send a link! :)