Beta for a gen Sherlock vid

[aruan]

I'd like to request a beta - or three - for my first finished vid, and of course as a newbie I'd love to know what works. But what would be more helpful is concrit on the technical aspects: timing, clip choice, PoV tweaking, pace, tone, anything related to visual storytelling. Nothing about the vid (except for the theme and song choice) is set in stone. There's no vanity here - yes, I love it, but not blindly. Um, otherwise, this process would've been much more difficult.

I didn't try for a master's thesis - the theme is simply reveling in the investigative partnership of Sherlock and John, highlighting how they've helped each other (so obviously no Reichenbach angst since, well, that's where my premise falls apart, damn you ACD.)

The vid is 3 minutes long, made with Adobe Premiere. Thanks in advance!

Comments

[frayadjacent]

I'd love to! FYI I'll be flying across the world in a couple days, so I'll have time, but no Internet. I should have it when I arrive though, and I'll have web access for the next day and a half before I leave.

[aruan]

Oooh, have fun globetrotting! And thanks for volunteering, I'll send along the link!

[mresundance]

I'd love to! PM me and I can give you my email!

(YAY Sherlock vids! \o/)

[aruan]

Sent! And yay for happy Sherlock things indeed. Thank you!