Beta Request: Women Doing Violence Vid

[paxpinnae]

Hello! I posted a few months ago looking for clips of women doing ugly violence as part of a multifandom vid. That vid's finally done, and I'm looking for a beta! I'd like feedback/help in two ways:

• I'd like a second eye looking for egregious technical flaws (are clips too dark, is the timing way off, does the vid play on computers that aren't mine, etc etc.)
• I'd also like feedback on the narrative of the vid.  Does the vid tell a clear story for you?  Are there bits that are confusing or seem out of place?

This vid has about 15-20 sources, so canon knowledge is not a concern; if I've done this properly, it should be comprehensible whether you know all the source fandoms or none of them..  If you can only help on one regard (technical OR narrative), that's fine too;  I'm really just looking for people who can kick my butt and tell me to do it properly, .  If this sounds like you, please e-mail me at paxpinnae at gmail dot com.

ETA: Uh, in case it wasn't clear from the "women doing violence" bit, there are some ladies who get hurt in this vid, and one of them is an 11-year-old (Hit Girl).  It's not too graphic, but if you have violence or child harm issues you may not want to beta this.